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Wednesday, 27 February 2019

Irobot movie reveiw

Throughout the last few lessons in English, our class has been watching the movie Irobot. This is a futuristic movie based around a universe of robots. These robots have to follow three laws which are.

  • A robot can't harm a human
  • A robot must follow all instruction of a human unless it conflicts with the first law 
  • A robot must protect its own exitance unless it conflicts with the other two laws
These laws are encrypted into the computers of the robots in the movie. But the plot of the movie is that the creator of these robots has died by an unknown source. But this is unusual because a robot can't harm a human. This unknown killer and the mysteries of a new harmful robot. Intrigued me as an audience, into wanting to know the story of the movie. Through which we find out that the creator of the robots, made a new law breaking robot. To hint the main character into realizing the damage the robots were about to cause.

Leading the protagonist, with hints and clues through this new robot. Provided us as an audience to think deeper into the movie. To uncover what would happen next. Replaying moments in my head to see if they match up with what was going on now. I thoroughly enjoy how the director has told this story, of compassion, and trust. Because we're growing into a world full of technology. Which each day are influencing us through social media, adds on television, and other peoples opinions. The movie tells us to keep vigilant, still, uphold the values that we are humans have and to care for the ones around us.

Overall the movie gave a good insight into the possibilities of the future, as humans grow in capability and ingenuity. But also tells us to upkeep the important values of human life.


Wednesday, 14 November 2018

English creative writing

Under the darkness of time, Erebus found a brother, the creator of everything to do with exploding light. Feasting from the many unknown pure elements within the night. Apollo rose to meet his new welcoming brother. Throughout the galaxy was many available places for these two brothers to live. Erebus had designated a piece of darkness to which Apollo could happily live. Apollo was not fond of what there was to do. Apollo tried to call his brother so that they could do something together. His brother didn't respond to any of his questions. This led Apollo to believe, that he had full control of his patch of the universe. Light became known for the first time within the universe. Created by the dark times, Apollo had feasted on the elements of the universe. All fell into place by a magnitude of explosions. The orbiting glow of luminous light, attracted to each other, clumping together causing an array of attention to Erebus. Within seconds Erebus rose to attend what Apollo had created. The depths of the universe could be seen in one place. Erebus was devastated on the creation of light. This led to a massive argument. Using these new orbiting lights, Apollo threw them at Erebus. Weakening him with every shot. This almost caused defeat to Erebus. The orbiting glows of light, grew to Apollo and with every hit gave him more strength. To defeat his brother who ultimately found him. Led Erebus to retreat, not having the ability to resurrect this disruption Apollo had made. The many glows could be seen from all places. Which revealed to Apollo a place to enjoy his time within the universe, dashing around these now called stars. Not having to worry about Erebus who hides within the dark night. Hoping that someone will meet him, to act as a welcoming brother. Hoping that they will show the same gratitude, as he did to someone who ultimately destroyed and ruined his way of life.


Friday, 26 October 2018

How did it become

Under the darkness of time, Erebus found a brother, the creator of everything to do with exploding light. Feasting from the many unknown pure elements within the night. Apollo rose to meet his new welcoming brother. Throughout the galaxy was many available places for these to brothers to live. Erebus had designated a piece of darkness to which Apollo could happily live. Apollo was not fond of what there was to do. Apollo tried to call his brother on what there is to do. His brother didn't respond to any of the Apollo questions. This led Apollo to believe, that he had full control of his patch of the universe. Light became known for the first time within the universe.  Created by the dark times, Apollo had feasted on the elements of the universe. All fell into place by a magnitude of explosions. The orbiting glow of luminous light, attracted to each other, clumping together causing an array of attention to Erebus. Within seconds Erebus rose to attend what Apollo had created. The depths of the universe could be seen from the one place. Erebus was devastated on the creation of light. This led to a massive argument. Using these new orbiting lights, Apollo threw them at Erebus. Weakening with every


Not yet finished

Tuesday, 23 October 2018

The six sentence story

Once upon a time sat Aron the spicules monster of doom fluff covered in scrub, blood, and hate. Perched within the bridge of ridge come valley, and the depth of sand sunk water to feast on the movement of everything above. With many of the lingering members of the community disguised by the actions and looks of this spicules monster. He find peace, devouring the forever coming neighbors, provide fluff covered doom the chance to enhance his power of evolution, slowly trying to make changes to his body, trying to impress the rest of the community. Feeling underestimated from having the backlash of the community. Aron builds an underwater haven to seclude him from the vicious member of the township, only to live by himself and enjoy the beauty of his very own body.

Friday, 21 September 2018

English

Create object warning description.

Feet:

Watch out for the many oversize feet, as it doesn't take as long to get kicked. But make sure you be careful of many undersized feet (1-5), as they can be quiet and sinister. These feet get you closer to friends, and away from the x. Word of warning doesn't let your feet ruin the rest of your body. Don't want crushed toes by the end of the day.

Clocks

Warning: Don't be cooped up listening to the sound of the many clings, dongs, and rings of clocks. Grandfather clocks provide enjoyment, but also mesmerize you from the outside world. Don't be associated with time, you know you have at least 24 hours a day right. This

Alphabet story:

A bouncing child devoured enchiladas, fingerpicking glazed hotdogs identifying judgemental knickerbockers. Ludacris multitasking nanas overidentifying problems questions random street teenagers unemployed.



Monday, 20 August 2018

Levers

Levers pivot on a fulcrum just like a seesaw.Image result for seesaw lever

Friday, 27 July 2018

Novel studies



One advertisement for ‘Tomorrow, When The War Began’ states:

‘Hell isn’t only a place for the damned, sometimes it’s a place where the saved take refuse… Seven teenagers take a trip to Hell. And seven come back. To Hell’

  1. What could ‘Hell’ mean in this context? The hunger games.
  2. Why do you think the story is entitled ‘Tomorrow When the War Began’ To show that the characters are anticipating, and knowing what is upcoming to the near future.
  3. What does that make you think the book will be about?
    War, like hunger games.
  4. What do you think the characters will be like?
    A group fighting with each other against a bigger force.





Looking at the original cover to the right, answer the following questions, remember to explain why you think that for each answer:

  • How do you think this story will be written? In the context that the characters are writing, and telling the plot of what they are accomplishing. To knowing an anticipating whats happening.
  • Why do you think the story is titled as it is? To show that the plot has been anticipated for a period of time. To coincide with how the characters are going to resolve the plot.
  • Where do you think the story will take place? In hell, due to advertisements stating that seven friends make a trip to hell. To where I think that attitudes and beliefs will come back to them
  • What time period do you think the story is set in? Sometime between 1939 and 1945. Due to the cover showing a ww2 M2 browning 50cal machine gun.


  1. What are the advantages and disadvantages of first-person narration? When writing disadvantages of the first person can be very limiting. The reader can only see through the emotion and feeling of the one character. To where advantages can be the reader feels emotions and thoughts through an overview of characters.
  2. Why do you think Ellie needs to tell the story in chronological order? To show that many of the events accumulate to where they become steps to a main event in the story.
  3. Pick one interesting word from the chapter, find its meaning, and explain why it is interesting. Humorous, this word means to show or provide laughter. This word was interesting to me due to the fact that I don't use this word often in my writing.
  4. John Marsden foreshadows several events and characters in this chapter. Make three predictions based on the evidence in the text about what may occur later in the story.
  5. What kind of story do you think Ellie is going to tell? Uses evidence from the text to support your answers. An adventurous story of their trip to hell.



  1. Why does Robyn think they are the only people ever to have gone into Hell? Because no one knows whether if anyone been there or if anyone bothered.
  2. Why do you think the valley is called Hell? Becuase saitens steps were in a valley. To where they called it hell.
  3. Why must the teenagers seem like visitors from hell to the wild things living in the clearing? I feel that they must think that they are disruptive people. Like people who might live in hell.
  4. What picture of Kevin do we get in this chapter? That he has bad habits, that have stuck with him, who you can never get him out of them.
  5. At times Ellie switches her narration from retelling the story to commenting about her life in the present - why do you think the author has chosen to write in this style? To show that her story can relate to the present, from first-person narration.


  1. Do you think the way they handled the snake incident was appropriate? No, I feel that them standing around the bag was daungorus.
  2. Ellie claims that ‘Hell’ is only a label and that people label things all the time, often ignoring or overlooking certain labeled places or things. She then comes to the conclusion that ‘Hell was people’. Is she right? What’s your opinion, on labeling and Hell?
    I belive that she has a point in some situation. Becuase people do label people, clothing and wealth. But hell being labeld is up to your desion in your belif.
  3. What was especially peculiar about the planes that flew over Hell? ‘Their ------, their ------, their----- frightened me.’ Do these characteristics have any significance? Many of these planes were flying stealth. Where they were flying suspiusoly low. For planes flying in dosens.
  4. Corrie and Kevin are the only couples in the group, but the trip was bound to bring friends closer. So why does Homer’s interest in Fi seem so odd to Ellie? To where Ellie could be jelous or fancy Homer.
  5. Fi brushes off the planes coming back from Commemoration Day. Why do you think the planes were flying over Wirrawee? Because it was at an easy target to where the enemy know their will be a gatherin of alot of people.
  6. Robyn claims there were dozens and dozens of planes flying over them. What is Lee’s response? Is his suggestion resonable? Lees response is that this could be the start of ww3. Creating a world full of posibiltys, which could come from diffrent scinarios around the world. I feel that to say it could be WW3, is quite unresnible to the fact that they were, disingadged from the world. For a period of time.


  1. What does Corrie’s choice in career say about her character? That when countrys, people have given to her, she wants to give back to them. In situations that she is ensuded about, and what they need most in their country like nurses in Affrica.
  2. The group’s ability to avoid arguing with each other is rare- do you think that there would have been more drama if you and your friends went bush for a week? Yes I defintly feel that their would be arguing very occasionally. To where we would argue about our idears. We would not back down. This would creat a camp, that would be quite technical. And the argueing would be for the best.
  3. Why do you think Ellie and Lee feel uneasy just before their return to Wirrawee from the Bush? Becuase they've experience a great time on a trip with their friends. To where their has not been the influence of the outside world demanding where their steps and paths should go.
  4. What do you predict will await the group back home, why do you think this? An unexpectided twist of distater and to where a plot will need to uncoverded or solvded by the group and indivduals.


  1. What is the first sign that something is wrong at Ellie’s house? When arrivieng at Ellie's house, the group come across an eventfull sight. To see all animals on their property dead. Could've been an army, or a personal attact.
  2. Who is the first person to really realise what is happening?
    Corrie seems to be investergating her way, through the many hallways and rooms. She knows some thing is up, and is useing her inititave to keep every one safe.
  3. What is Ellie’s reaction to this person’s caution? Why do you think she reacts this way?
  4. If you were in this situation, would you test the radio or not? Give reasons for your thinking. Yes, haveing the ability to see in the outside world if anbody was their can be quite vital information. It could prove if their is a war, famine or world wide crisis. I feel that haveing that information that if any body is out their, could come in handy.
  5. Do you think the way the teenagers reacted to the realisation that Australia may have been invaded or at war was realistic? Why/why not. Yes I feel they knew the realisation that war could have made it to their home town, but didn't ponder on their minds when dessions had to be made for their own life, and familys problems.
  6. What possible reasons exist that could spark war or invasion of Australia? Possible invassion reason could of come from Austrailas conections to, being close to Asia and Indoneisa. Aussies vast landscape, great for a base camp and no one knowing. Their gold and inferstuctior, or their military.



  1. Which people in the group are starting to stand out as leaders, is this surprising? I feel that Corrie is becomeing some who is leading the team. She is having more of an opion on the groups dessions and the deciding of where to go.

  2. Do you think that taking Kevin’s dog Flip to Corries house was a mistake? Explain your thoughts.
  3. What does Lee mean when he says ‘we might have to make some ugly choices?’
  4. How is Ellie’s image of Kevin changing in this chapter?
  5. Is the decision to split into smaller groups a wise one? Give reasons
  6. Why is it that Elli’s group decides to act ‘illogically’ and survey the Showgrounds together?
  7. Why does the idea of a female soldier surprise Ellie?
  8. If your parents were captured in a situation like this, would they have been ‘sensible’, or would there have been violence?
  9. How is Ellie ‘transformed’ once she steps out from behind a tree near the

       Showgrounds?

  1. Ellie and Kevin’s quick-thinking allowed them to turn a ride-on lawnmower

       into a bomb. Was this moral behaviour? Did they do the right thing, or
       should they have surrendered themselves?
  1. Predict what you think has happened to Lee and Robyn.